i loved this story you did a great job on it :)

This is so good. It is really touching and I swear, if you had continued on that note any longer you would have had me crying. I loved it and I really commend you for your writing.

Hahaha I love the bits about "the term when he decided to become ambidextrous"- so like James not to give in and tell Mme Pomphrey!

A term being Ambidextrous would suck. Anything I do with my left hand looks like a three year old threw a tantrum with a pencil. That they survived is enough to prove that they're brilliant.

Oh poor Sirius. I always feel so bad for him with everything he went through. I really can't imagine how much it'd suck. I liked this story. You did a really good job at showing Sirius' happy memories of James causing bittersweet emotions. And I really liked how you had Sirius talking to McGonagall about it. That's actually something I haven't seen before and I really like it. And it's always fun to hear various theories on what went wrong when the Marauder's attempted to become animagi.

Favourite lines:

"Not that Sirius thought one could really get in trouble more than a decade after leaving school but this was McGonagall and everything was possible"

""Remus has a whole theory about how they disappeared into ether or non-being while James was changing. He wrote a paper about it in fifth year, I'm sure he'd show it to you if you ask.""
^^Ha! I'd like to read that essay

""That term James decided he wanted to become ambidextrous…" McGonagall said with dawning comprehension.

"Well, he didn't want anyone to know he couldn't even hold his wand properly."

"And you decided to become ambidextrous as well," she said, looking at Sirius.

"I wasn't about to let him make a fool of himself alone. Besides it turned out to be useful later on.""
^^I love how this shows the deep bond that only James and Sirius really could have. The deeper than brothers and best friends bond. Love.

Great story! People do forget how much Sirius cared for James. It's nice to see Minerva's softer side as well. Good job!

Lovely story, I really liked it. Nice insight into Sirius and McGonagall.

I really like this story (: It made me smile. Keep it up!

Aw, it was so sweet. This seems plausibly canon, and I relaly like your style!! Cheers!

Wow. This is just wow. Normally I find non-romance stories boring, but this was great(:

It was very sad, but it also made me smile more than once. Good job (=

So good and so sad. Brilliant.

loved it ;)

In one word.
Brilliant.

Beautifully done. I love the fics where Sirius and Minerva have a conversation about school days.

Hehehe, that was fun! ^_^ I always did wonder about how they must have been trying to change... *grins* I love all the little screw ups. Sirius always was my favorite character and this little bit of insight is wonderfull. Thank you, I loved it.

X Wolfje