This is great! Good to see a Negi and Konoka pairing; I'm tired of the Konoka/Setsuna pairings, it bothers me. Good work!!

Oh I'm gonna make a Negi/Konoka lemon.

I've always liked girls like Konoka in stories (Rather than the scary fiery girls like Asuna. I've got alot of bad memories of girls like that in real life, I don't need it in my books. xD). The sweet innocent motherly type I guess, haha. I'd like to find at least one where Konoka and Negi get paired up. There's one other story like that on here but it's not exactly...pairing.

It's a short, but sweet story. I like it :).

Absolutely wonderful. Really a beautiful piece.

I liked it. It's great to see Konegi. I honestly think to many stories focus on KoSet. I don't have anything against that pairing, its just that I want to see some diversity and maybe even a few obscure or even unheard of pairings.

This is great even if it is short

this was very good, keep up the good work.

Good story I liked it I hope you will do more stories like this in the future