Ahh Baltheir you dog. Why does my girl Fran put up with your silliness?

Lol.

This was nice! They were so in character that I could hear the words with their voices. It was all very nice.

-goodwitch2008

This was lovely. I'll be waiting for the next.

I like it, sounds cool. A Chapter 2 would be neat. 7.9/10.0 is my rating.

It was really interesting to read the first chapter. And I couldn't stop laughing when Balthier said he doesn't want to trade his shoes for food. Great story :)
Good luck
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