|Reviews for The Assassination of Trust|
| Jean 1/11/09 . chapter 9
O.M.G. you are a-m-a-z-i-n-g! it's one of the best fanfic i've ever read. i literally just couldn't take my eyes off..;) and i have to tell you that your fic is 100 times better than the movie i watched last night! by the way, your destructive kinda Spencer is just so hot! didn't know that i had a smokingfetish until now..*ahem* anyways Can't wait to see what happens when Spency confronts Ashley! .. and uh i'm glad that you stuck with your original ending for The Dennison House :) becuz honestly i didn't see that coming it! lol. thanks for writing such a good fic, you totally made my day... pms! ;)
| LoLo06 1/8/09 . chapter 9
Well at least I can tell Ashley really loves Spencer and she's not as much of an evil bitch as I thought lol! I'm glad you don't tell us whose point of view the chapters are from too! PMS!
| goingup 1/7/09 . chapter 9
Oh, sshiyate.. she does?
How come she never said a word if she trusted Spencer! She must love Rebecca, she must have feelings for that...thing!
It still wouldn't stop me from mushing Ashley to a black pulp if I were Spencer, god! how could she...argh!
I agree with not putting a POV at the beginning. It's so much exciting to realize later who's talking but Dude,this story is genius.
| ElloEllo9 1/7/09 . chapter 9
I was so unbelievably stoked when I got the alert you update. Ashley is so hard to read to understand. I am so mad at her for hurting Spencer. I am just gonna sit tight and wait for more. Awesome work!
| SpashInc 1/7/09 . chapter 9
WOW! I love this update. I wanted to see Ashley POV for awhile as you know this is my fav by far. Perfect!
P.S. I would like to see Paula's POV.
| simplet77 1/7/09 . chapter 9
damn, i liked how u got in and portrayed ashleys mind and thoughts. its was crazy accurate (in my opion). please update asap.
| Coachkimm 1/7/09 . chapter 9
Wow what a great update. It fun seeing now what was happening in her mind during the first story.
| jazziejazz94 1/7/09 . chapter 9
okay so i think i got this one
the forget to remember
foreget to lie thing was awsome
i liked how you described things like that well i dont know im not realy wording it right and im having trouble concentrating lol not on the story but on what im trying o say but you did a great job i loved it :)
and im guessing this was a flash back? it would have to be i guess :) anyways its been forever but im busy so ill cut this short and tyyl :)
pms please :)
| Amber 1/7/09 . chapter 9
About how many chapters is this story going to be? If you don't mind me asking
| RWalker0201 1/7/09 . chapter 8
omfg i love your story it's awesome and i really want to read the dennison house in Ashley's POV!
| BrownEyez44 1/7/09 . chapter 9
I'm still so confused!
But it's a good confusion? lol
I love reading a story that you never completely understand until the end! :)
But I hate how controlled Ashley feels. Like she needs Rebecca to sustain life or something.
Rebecca scares me, because from what I gather, Ashley is just a pawn in her little game, because she wants Ashley's daughter. And that's just wrong, does no one think of the child and how they're going to scar her for life with all this insanity?
Ok.. my little rant is over lol
Please update again soon, I really can't wait to see what's going to happen! :D
| mtd28 1/5/09 . chapter 8
OMG! I loved your first story and I was thrilled when I stumbled across the sequel, but now I think you're just teasing me by not posting updates! Please don't torture me any longer, I want to know what happens!
| BrownEyez44 1/3/09 . chapter 8
Ok.. I spent like 3 hours reading "The Dennison House" and then catching up by reading this fanfic!
I think the story lines are amazing!
Yea.. the whole prostitution thing is a bit out there.. but how the rest of it ties in makes it a completely understandable topic of choice for your fanfic! :)
You have me on the edge of my seat with the sequel and how you actually change POV's every chapter unlike the first part. Keeps me wondering what's going on with the other characters and how it all ties in!
And I'm dying to know what happens by the end!
And I'm dying to know if it ends up as a Spashley love ending!
Cause with the way Spencer was betrayed.. I can't see it.. but at the same time.. I'm secretly hoping for it despite the way Ashley has messed up lol
Ok.. I'm done now.. lol.. I had plenty of chapters of comments to catch up on.. so I thought I'd write you a long one! :)
Keep up the great work and update soon please! :D
| lexi12603 1/2/09 . chapter 8
PLEASE tell me that's not the end. i LOVE this fic and the denninson house.
| lexi12603 12/31/08 . chapter 1
i loved the first one can't wait to read this! Happy New Year!