This story was awesome! Beautiful! :)

Another amazing epic. Loved it all - a fantastic story idea. I loved Gabe and would love to see him again. Also loved the Hotch/Prentiss in this :P haha!

This is amazing writing. I have to say I love how persistent Rossi was. It amazed me how true you were to the characters thru the whole story. I must say this Definitively needs a Squeal. Its too good to end. Well another story of my checklist and read to read the other ones you've wrote. Thank you so much for this amazing writing.

THIS IS LOVE 3.

I swear, i'm literally rolling on the floor laughing and crying tears of laughter at this amazing story, especially this chapter & the last one. And I NEVER laugh. Ever. You're my new favorite person.

-LiZa 3

let the hunt begin ;D

Okay, well, school professionals have to update their credentials too often for this to be believable (Shields using false information from a 68 yr. old counselor). But it's fiction so I'll go with it.

Very fun chapter :)

My favorite lines:

"You know damn good and well that you're the master in that area for me, David Rossi. Or does that poor, pitiful ego need stroking?" she said with mock pity.

Smiling wickedly, David murmured, "Trust me, honey, it ain't my ego that's in need of stroking."

Mr. Shields I'm guessing is a suspect, but I have doubts. From my experience working in a school system, his behavior and answers do not seem suspicious. But it's possible.

Could the deputy be our 1st suspect?

Sweet chapter. And bravo to you... I've never gathered the courage to write dialogue for a character with bad grammar.

Whew! That went better than I thought it would. Yeah Hotch!

Loved this line from JJ... "Whatever, you just keep your lips, hands, and other assorted manly parts to yourself!"

Eek! I really, really, really disliked Rossi in this chapter. I have to agree with JJ, he's acting like a father. Little girl? And he's very controlling which is not healthy. I'm glad they will learn how to negotiate.

LOL! He's a master at dodgeball. Great line.

Cracking up that JJ was embarrassed by throwing up.

Great job Rossi and Morgan!