Excellent story.. any chance of an update?

wow, amazing story!

great story. i love how orignal the plot. please update soon!

Hi,

just wanted to stop by to tell you that your story has been recommended at Portkey. http://talk./index.php?showforum=28

You have some very loyal fans. :)Maybe you'd like to post your story there, too.

Imagine my surprise when i checked my favorites list and i saw YOU update. My good god, I was so surprised. I read it as fast as I could and I am amazed, as always. : ) I didn't think this was a work in progress, I thought it was already finished.

This is so amazing. I love how you weaved in HP-Harry with the post-Hermione-killing-Voldemort Harry. I could just imagine the 'heartbreaking innocence' on eleven-year-old Harry's face. And I must say, i found Harry so adorable when he just pulled Hermione to his father.

I just adore the whole thing, actually. I could feel the warmth from everyone, especially James. You really did and wrote James well, from a stubborn boy to a levelheaded (sometimes haha) man. I could really feel the admiration they all had for Hermione.

And really, the eleven-year-old HHR interaction -- too cute for words. I also love the whole mystifying/paranormal thing going on - it's not freaky, but it's done in a more heartwarming sense.

To hear that there are two more chapters on the way - I'll definitely watch out for those. Unbelievably fantastic. : )

I love this story! I've never seen a Hermione more selfless than the one in your story. I don't know how you are going to end this but even if you don't update for 10 years, for me chapter 3 can be a concrete ending. Can think of anything more to say. MORE POWER!! please update soon. Jane rulz!

Holy Molely! This is brillant! I have read fanfiction for years and this is one of the best I've read and that is saying something... I hope you are going to update soon. Absolutely wonderful!!

Brilliant! Absolutely loved it.

I like the way you made it realistic 'cause there was no way Hermione could have gone back after all those changes she had made. James' changing opinions on Hermione (from ugly and not-worthy to an inspiration)and Hermione's journal were nicely fleshed out.

Keep up the good work!

this story is beautiful

i am really hope you updte soon

PLease update soon! I can hardly wait!

AHAHAHAHA

I knew the day would come ... that you would UPDATE!

Seriously though this was a pleasure to read. The part right at the end where she apparently somehow manifests physically was a bit much. (Even if it was just an illusion she decided to do for some reason (and he really didn't drop his wallet) it's still more than any ghost has done in canon IIRC.) But overall it was great. "Jane" was extremely active between Harry and Hermione, basically being a parent/teacher (not conference) to both of them, but hey, that's completely in character. ;)

I always say "don't rush yourself for your audience, better to do it right; speed doesn't matter as long as updates come" -- but damn, I wouldn't mind if it was a LITTLE faster. :D

A nice 'feel good' and happy ending! I was a little unhappy for 'Jane' - if I deliberately put aside the overall positive ambience of the chapter and think about it - but hopefully as a phantom she got some joy out of protecting Harry and seeing him with a happy and joyful Hermione/herself. Which I hope will be the case as the two proceed through their Hogwarts career.

Hermione being a lonely and friendless child is a common enough fanon construct - it's not actually canon fact, is it? - but still a powerful image to use, nonetheless. Very satisfying to see her link up with Harry. The chapter left me feeling quite good about those two. :-)

Stuffed animals! Hee. :-)

That was sweet story.

What a wonderful chapter/story this is!! You're exploiting to the maximum one of the unique strengths of fan fiction; including (so many!) bits of canon lore which can't help but titillate the reader as he recognises and appreciates each one. It's marvellous stuff.

That said, I don't understand the new prophecy thing at all. Given your note at the end I think we're supposed to believe that it's authentic? A bona fide prognostication somehow generated upon Hermione's trip back to the past? I would have preferred that it was something she'd fabricated and planted with Dumbledore's help so as to draw in and trap Riddle.

I loved the core theme of this chapter of James's maturation and his respect for Hermione. I also liked his thoughts about how superficial H/G is and how Ginny would likely had never been attracted to a non-famous Harry. :-) Canon's Hermione - and your Hermione - has ever so much more character, more *substance*, than Ginny ever had.

I'm very sad that Hermione died ... you owes us a happy ending, I think, and I hope that's what's awaiting me/us in the next chapter. *crosses fingers* The unfolding of her plans, and the insight into her thoughts - the despondency of a girl lost in time, forever apart from the boy whom she loved - and who never knew of or returned that love (Gawd, I hate Ginny sometimes)? Dying so that he might have a better life? Wah. Very poignant.

I really do think that Happy Ending is going to turn up. After all, Hermione's going to be born about three or so years after the end of this chapter, right? As long as you avoid the time paradox problem I hope that we'll see her again. And maybe James will direct his son in her direction ... *crosses toes*.