Really beautiful and well-written 3

Oh my goodness. That was so sad. What a beautiful story though.

Wow. That really brought tears to my eyes. I can see them doing this in one of the Naruto movies. Proves that a story doesn't need to be 100,0 words long to be effective. Great job.

Ciao,

KHU

I like the way you chose Sai's point of view. It's a sad story, Naruto dying and the thought that he lied for everyone else's sake but his own.

Thank you. Enjoyed reading it.

wow

MAry, i wish i had your ability to turn a phrase. i am not even a fan of naruto but i almost cried! I really sincerely feel for naruto and i have only watched like three episodes. It was great, i love to read your stuff! Love Ya!

Wow. That was beautiful...and so sad. I loved it. I love Sai. He's a complex character but I think you did an awesome job from his POV. * Stars!

Well thought out, and would love to see the sotry behind it if you expand it and make a story like it, not to many novel lengths where NTO dies...