 ArmoredSoul 2009-02-11 . chapter 5Haha!
I love the little Transformers cameo you popped in there.
Makes me wonder which ones WALL-E picked up.
Cars and airplanes huh?
That's a lot of different bots there...
X3 |
 ArmoredSoul 2009-02-11 . chapter 1Wall-E is having EPIC SAD FACE. |
 SoleSurvivor23 2008-12-28 . chapter 5I absolutely LOVE WALL-E and you have done a great job capturing his and the other robots personalities. I also liked how you added Hannah and the other EVE probes, that was a wonderful idea. Oh, and where did you find out that the cockroach's name was Hal? And how about the other robots? Where did you find their names? Once again, a very awesome story! |
 The Mad shoe1 2008-12-24 . chapter 5Loved this chapter, it was adorable! |
 Netbug009 2008-12-21 . chapter 5I loved all the references you made with the toys. xD
Anyways, again, i think a little less dialog could have been used for WALL-E/EVE, but still this was very cute and nicely written. I really liked how the lighter has been used through all of this.
Thanks for a great story! :D |
 FraGmenTd 2008-12-20 . chapter 5Very nice ending! The overall story is something that could very easily have gone into the movie as a sort of epilogue. It kept with all the same elements that the movie had, and didn't go over the top with radical ideas that would never have happened with those characters. Awesome story, looking forward to more from you in the future. |
 Warlock In Disguise 2008-12-20 . chapter 5Wonderful!
Buataful!
Amazeing!
Better then any crap I would write!
GOOD JOB! |
 sk2013 2008-12-19 . chapter 5NICE! No complaints! |
 xLilypadsx 2008-12-18 . chapter 5such a sweet ending =) |
 gryphonworks 2008-12-18 . chapter 5Ah, what a heartwarming conclusion! It was a joy to read, and I like how you tied in the lighter at the end. I knew it would work again once within earth's atmosphere but I hadn't thought of how nicely it could be juxtaposed with Eve's situation. That last line is probably my favorite out of the whole chapter, so sweet.
(It'd be awesome if in the future you wrote more stories that include Eve's sisters, I love reading about them~!) |
 FictionFactory 2008-12-18 . chapter 5Great story I liked it. Short, but good |
 Netbug009 2008-12-18 . chapter 4The beginning of this chapter made me chuckle a lot. The moment he got scooped up I could hear the sound from the repair ward escape in my head. Very cute and fitting. In general, I liked the plot of this chapter. :)
I couldn't help but feel the exchange was a bit dialog heavy though, between WALL-E and EVE. Obviously, that's hard situation to work with silently, but I think a little less dialoug could have been used all the same.
Still, very nice! Update soon! ^^ |
 Netbug009 2008-12-18 . chapter 3HAL! D'8
M-O stayed there an hours. GEEZ. That was a nice touch. It shows both how sad WALL-E is and how worried M-O is.
I like Hannah's character too. When you have a character who is close to canon and has a strong skill, it's easy to fall into Sue territory. From what I've seen so far, you haven't. You still made her quirky and despite her oddities, kept her like a teenager deep down. It's refreshing to see. |
 Netbug009 2008-12-18 . chapter 2Oh, I'm really liking this. :D I liked the paralleled in the final lines for both WALL-E and EVE, and I liked the bit with the lighter. I couldn't help, however, feel that the part where her and WALL-E say goodbye and she first realizes she's leaving him there could have been slowed a little for dramatic emphases, but I'm one of those people who can dramatic emphasize herself into half a chapter, so maybe that's just my style. I'm not sure. xD |
 FraGmenTd 2008-12-17 . chapter 4very cute story, very well written, too. Keep it up! |