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ArmoredSoul
2009-02-11 . chapter 5
Haha!
I love the little Transformers cameo you popped in there.
Makes me wonder which ones WALL-E picked up.
Cars and airplanes huh?
That's a lot of different bots there...
X3
ArmoredSoul
2009-02-11 . chapter 1
Wall-E is having EPIC SAD FACE.
SoleSurvivor23
2008-12-28 . chapter 5
I absolutely LOVE WALL-E and you have done a great job capturing his and the other robots personalities. I also liked how you added Hannah and the other EVE probes, that was a wonderful idea. Oh, and where did you find out that the cockroach's name was Hal? And how about the other robots? Where did you find their names? Once again, a very awesome story!
The Mad shoe1
2008-12-24 . chapter 5
Loved this chapter, it was adorable!
Netbug009
2008-12-21 . chapter 5
I loved all the references you made with the toys. xD

Anyways, again, i think a little less dialog could have been used for WALL-E/EVE, but still this was very cute and nicely written. I really liked how the lighter has been used through all of this.

Thanks for a great story! :D
FraGmenTd
2008-12-20 . chapter 5
Very nice ending! The overall story is something that could very easily have gone into the movie as a sort of epilogue. It kept with all the same elements that the movie had, and didn't go over the top with radical ideas that would never have happened with those characters. Awesome story, looking forward to more from you in the future.
Warlock In Disguise
2008-12-20 . chapter 5
Wonderful!
Buataful!
Amazeing!
Better then any crap I would write!
GOOD JOB!
sk2013
2008-12-19 . chapter 5
NICE! No complaints!
xLilypadsx
2008-12-18 . chapter 5
such a sweet ending =)
gryphonworks
2008-12-18 . chapter 5
Ah, what a heartwarming conclusion! It was a joy to read, and I like how you tied in the lighter at the end. I knew it would work again once within earth's atmosphere but I hadn't thought of how nicely it could be juxtaposed with Eve's situation. That last line is probably my favorite out of the whole chapter, so sweet.

(It'd be awesome if in the future you wrote more stories that include Eve's sisters, I love reading about them~!)
FictionFactory
2008-12-18 . chapter 5
Great story I liked it. Short, but good
Netbug009
2008-12-18 . chapter 4
The beginning of this chapter made me chuckle a lot. The moment he got scooped up I could hear the sound from the repair ward escape in my head. Very cute and fitting. In general, I liked the plot of this chapter. :)

I couldn't help but feel the exchange was a bit dialog heavy though, between WALL-E and EVE. Obviously, that's hard situation to work with silently, but I think a little less dialoug could have been used all the same.

Still, very nice! Update soon! ^^
Netbug009
2008-12-18 . chapter 3
HAL! D'8

M-O stayed there an hours. GEEZ. That was a nice touch. It shows both how sad WALL-E is and how worried M-O is.

I like Hannah's character too. When you have a character who is close to canon and has a strong skill, it's easy to fall into Sue territory. From what I've seen so far, you haven't. You still made her quirky and despite her oddities, kept her like a teenager deep down. It's refreshing to see.
Netbug009
2008-12-18 . chapter 2
Oh, I'm really liking this. :D I liked the paralleled in the final lines for both WALL-E and EVE, and I liked the bit with the lighter. I couldn't help, however, feel that the part where her and WALL-E say goodbye and she first realizes she's leaving him there could have been slowed a little for dramatic emphases, but I'm one of those people who can dramatic emphasize herself into half a chapter, so maybe that's just my style. I'm not sure. xD
FraGmenTd
2008-12-17 . chapter 4
very cute story, very well written, too. Keep it up!
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