I finally made the time to finish your story. It was really good, very exciting and inciteful too. Not only going into John/Yan's psyche, but Teyla's and a few others too. That was a very intriguing way of bringing John's memories back. Thanks again for a wonderfully written story. BlondieChemGirl

I was blown away by this story. I really liked how you broke down John's character to the basics and then built him back up through Teyla and Atlantis, etc. It was such a multidimensional journey that said a lot about both John's and Teyla's hold on their boundaries and each other for that matter. It was quite lovely. Well done.

What a tour de force! From start to finish this has been perfection in prose personified.

A sequel? You mention sequel and then consider that it may not happen! I can't take that sort of stress, no way. So I'm going on the premise that there is going to be one so that I can submit this review in the happiest frame of mind possible. So I'm sending masses, and I mean masses, of good positive vibes your way for you to write, write and do even more writing. Ah, I feel so much better...

I'm not sure why I am no longer receiving story alerts when a new chapter has been posted, but I've found this at last.

And was it worth waiting for? YES! This was simply staggering in its depth of action, pace and sheer magnetism. I have just had one of the best roller coaster rides ever without my feet leaving the ground! Shep was awe inspiring and you even managed to provide a little Shep and Teyla to make it just perfect.

Fantastic! I *loved* it, couldn't stop reading! Great work! --Chris

Bravo!

Well written and a joy as always.

I adore your fics!

Great story. Looking to the sequel.

Thank you so much for this great story. This was a journey back to self well worth reading. I, for one, would love a sequel.

I really enjoyed John's comparisons of how Yan would have reacted to a situation and then how he would act or as he said, as he HAD to react.

Also really looking forward to a sequel of this as I enjoyed this story immensely. Great writing!

really nice ending, for a wonderful story. great job! i enjoyed your descriptions all along the way, and i would love to read more.

Oh angsty angsty! Definitely true to character. It would take awhile to process what had happened. I feel a touch of sympathy for Ivali but I quickly move on to baited breath for the future for John and Teyla.

Loved how each of the team welcomed him back! You have the characters down pat and it is a delight to read their interactions. It feels like watching the show in my minds eye.

As for the sequel, is there such a thing as a friendly story stalker? If not, I am thinking of creating one! Please oh please, please, please write the sequel!

deffinantly room for a follow up :) great wrap though :)

Good story.

Random thought, why didn't they cloak the jumper?

woot! he's back! goodie! are you going to give a beckett explanation of how he got his memory back with th help of the outpost?

great chapter! update soon!

well hes got his memories but im sure there are a few he really dont want at all :) great chapter.