 SSpeedy 2008-12-03 . chapter 1Poor Christophe! ::hugs him::
"The other ship, a beat up looking bus with thrusters attacked, blared its horn loudly."
I believes you ment 'attached'. I thought the worse there for a minute. X3
Is great! I almost felt Chris' pain, the poor bugger. Why do I have the strangest feeling he'll be minus one leg soon?
Looking forward for chapter two and beyond. :D |