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The Lightning Flash
2008-12-05 . chapter 1
Hello! :P

Ah, Chris. It's always nice to know that someone cares about you enough to torture you so that your brother will be forced to hug you. AmIrite? =D

Nice fic, Hness. I shall await the next installment with baited breath. Think I'll use worms . . . .
SSpeedy
2008-12-03 . chapter 1
Poor Christophe! ::hugs him::

"The other ship, a beat up looking bus with thrusters attacked, blared its horn loudly."
I believes you ment 'attached'. I thought the worse there for a minute. X3

Is great! I almost felt Chris' pain, the poor bugger. Why do I have the strangest feeling he'll be minus one leg soon?
Looking forward for chapter two and beyond. :D
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