*jaw drops* oh my god, this is amazing! but... but it's not finished T_T wah. I really loved what was here though, excellent writing, and very dark!

Oh my god. I've never been a great fan of incest stories, but this one I LOVE! Please hurry with more!

woohoo! and the Takato/Yamakeru starts!

i really really like your story! hope you get the next chapter up soon!

Really really really good! Please continue!

This is just an awesome fic. You have handled the subject gracefully and I can't wait for another chapter

but now I am scared for Takeru

I knew it! I already thought TK would loose himself and hurt Matt. Well, he was druunk alright but still... By the way, I think you need to explain why Matt couldn't resist his little brother. I mean, did Matt has a problem that make him weaker than TK? Or did TK just grow up to be more muscular than Matt? And why did Matt finally didn't resist TK when he raped him? Was he fainted? That's explain all the bruises he had. Please post the next chapter quickly!

Dude, this story is so twisted, but I love it! Please, please, please have it end up Hikeru in the end...

Hmm, I fell TK in the edge of his sane because of his love to Matt and Kari's pregnant. Somehow I think that TK would do something horrible to Matt because he so madly in love with him. Like spike Matt's drink so he could fulfil his obession. What do you think?

Wow, I am loving this fic! Continue soon please!

very interesting. I like the way this is turning out - many ways it could go. Please continue.

Heh, I didn't see there was another chapter... please continue! This is so good! I wanna read more! Please?

You have to continue this, please! I love it soo much! I want to find out what happens! Also, maybe you might want to upgrade the rating to 'R', but that's your choice. Good fic!