I've got chills. That was excellent.

wow! i'm loving Tom Riddle even more! not voldemort though. truly amazing one shot!

Wow... Just wow. This was bloody brilliant. Outstanding!
The characters were so real, so believable.
I. Loved. It. ^_^

Amazing story! Your writing is excellent; you really have a talent for description and conveying emotion. Your characterization was also great. Your portrayal of Tom was very realistic, and you conveyed Myrtle's depression extremely well.

Great job!

That was beyond brilliant. You wove a great story full of sensuality and darkness, but not only that, you had support from the actual text that just added more depth and sorrow to your tale. Please write more.

This was good. The characters were realistic and I thought that it was well written.

Hiya dear!

I've already told you how much I LOVED this, but I want to post the same review I did at tnl:

Wow. Your characterizations were truly riveting. I was so creeped out by the first section... your Tom Riddle is brilliant! And Myrtle... such hopeless desperation. Reading her gave me this emptiness in the pit of my stomach. Well done!