I enjoyed this alot. It was a wonderful interpitation of what was going on with Edward while Bella spoke with Jacob. It makes sence that he would go to her for advice too. BRAVO!

Great story,I enjoyed the scene with Tanya and Edward .You really don't get much from them in the boom together .

Great story:)))

that was nice, I love Tanya-Edward interaction:)

That was really good...

I love this 3

this is an aspect of the wedding that never occurred to me, i'm impressed that Tanya's honest attempt to help without making things purposefully uncomfortable

OH MY GOD, THIS IS AMAZING! i've always wondered what would be happening while jacob and bella were dancing! THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU FOR POSTING THIS! YOU ARE SO TALENTED! you perfectly captured edward's pov! TEAKM EDWARD 4EVER! btw, i like the sexual parts of it hehe ;)

I like Edward's perspective of the dance, thanks for sharing it.

that was nice! glad Tanya didnt try to seduce Edward!

Ahhh, so it was Tanya that Edward spoke to of his honeymoon! I always assumed it was his father and brothers, but I guess it would make sense that he'd ask her first, given her "expertise"! I half expected her to be the one to suggest the warm ocean waters, but maybe that was Edward's own idea. I would've loved to hear Tanya's offer to "tutor" him, though-that would've been priceless!

It wouldn't be tacky of me to ask if you have or are planning to do the honeymoon at some point? I know you'd do it justice.

Debbie

Another good story from you. Once again, I enjoyed your version of Edward. It was nice to see him interact with Rosalie and to see more of Tanya. I liked how you brought in Jacob and Bella's conversation every now and then. And the last line was great:

"For once, restraint would be the last thing on my mind."

Keep writing!

Raizie recommended this to me today after a discussion of Breaking dawn. I enjoyed it!

OMG THANK YOU THAT WAS GREAT!, AND KINDA HOTT LOL,

love it!