Nice chat between Edward and Tanya! :D

I love it! 3

Makes sense that Edward would be talking to Tanya about the same thing as Bella was talking to Jacob about.

I think Tanya gave him some good advice and showed him what could hapen if he lost control. Jacob on the other hand didn't help Bella at all.

It worked out but Bella had a few bruises and Edward went Berserk and almost ignored poor Bella for the entire honeymoon.

Good job I like it.

so well written you really have a knack for EPOV.

so Tanya finally does something useful. Yea for her. Normally she is just causing way too much trouble. I am glad she could be sort of helpful. this is an interesting scenario for you to tackle, i hadn't previously thought of it. Nicelly played!

I'm new to fan fiction, but I just wanted to let you know that I thought this story was great! I think you do a fabulous job writing Edward's POV. Have you ever done, or thought of doing, the honeymoon or the wedding ceremony from Edward's POV?

Poor Edward!

What a lovely one shot! This is a missing scene from the book that I would love to see in there! I really enjoyed it!

I always wondered what was going on with edward during this time... thanks it was great. ... and as always Tanya has to throw the offer out there... I really dont like her ... I really wish she would find a mate. I think I could like her if she wasnt always attempting to steal Edward. Other than that she is an interesting character. :)

Nice! I loved it. And the parallels between Edward and Jacob's thoughts were great.

Have a wonderful day!

-Dazzle.

This is excellent! I'm so used to reading Tanya as the vampire that never gives up trying to seduce him. It was nice to see her portrayed as a true friend earnestly trying to help him.

oh this is Edward all right! You're an amazing writer when it comes to Edward.

i loved this. it was so accurate. and you were able to portray the characters the way stephenie did. hope i can write like this some day.

Edward dacing with Tanya and her explaining what she did was the last thing on my mind. WOW! I loved it, it was uncomfortable to listen to because I could try and think of how Edward felt. Awkward even because she was someone that fancy'd him so to speak. But it was more then i asked for. I am proud of Rose too; even though her and Bella become best friends after this - in a horrific way but its okay. I loved it. Thanks so much for writing it. I can see what Edward might have been doing away from Bella and Jacob now. Odd! ]

Krysta D.

This is really good. I love your story and it goes along with New Moon perfectly well :)

Keep up the good work!

Interesting. Tanya's been a good friend here. ]] Good advice for Eddie.