Wonderful story! Wish you can update the story. Want more chapters!

You are missing a bunch of commas and it has absolutely no taste. I think you should add in a little bit more spontaneous lines, this is just dull without any excitement.

Please update and please don't let sylar kill her

O.O okay this is the fuckin worst story I have every written. This POS burns my eyes! How can I be nice? I can flame if I want to flame! Free country isn't it? I'm suprised you're not a stupid blonde white girl. This fic doesn't even look original I bet You copied! I guess black writters can't write for shit I guess than. STOP WRITING AND LEAVE THIS SITE FOR GOOD YOU SUCK!

great story, please continue!

wow

its great!

cant wait for more!

Please update again soon! It's great!

HaHa, Angela stole socks. Great chapter as usual :-)

Love this story so far! It's a refreshing alternative to some of the common fics we see. Keep it up!

This story is an interesting take on season 1. I noticed something that didn't match wit season 1 though. Nathan was running for House of Representatives in season 1, not Senator, or at least i think he did. Keep going!

Leave it to Peter's family to ruin movie night, lol. I hope he and Sofia tell eachother how they feel soon! I can't wait for more!

Love this! Please update soon, k? Silent Knight over and out!

I LOVE THIS STORY!

Ooh I like her abilities :-) I can't wait for more!

Awesome chapter, I can't wait for more!