Aw!! I love it!

It was nice!

I read this story awhile back, and I could have sworn I reviewed! I am sorry for that, but this is a really cute story and I enjoyed how they told their lives in the form of a fairy tale like story to Marti.

HOORAY! I loved it so much! Congrats for keeping them totally in character! It was awesome.

Oh my god! That was beautiful, and cute, and sweet, and so inocent!!
I just fell in love with this history!! I scream so loud of excitment when a I finish it that a I woke up my little doggy!!
This go to favorites!
Keep on working like this! You are AMAZING!

so sweet loved it!

WoW! I loved it! Great job! 10/10 Adorable!

Still cute! You know, when you wrote that comment on brussels sprouts and broccoli, all I could think of was that SpongeBob episode where Patrick writes that song, and the last two lines are "You win this round...Broccoli!" Aren't our minds crazy?

Hope you write something else soon!

i liike iit. :D great job. lizard the wizard?! LMAO. :))

Aw, this was adorable! I loved the Smarti/Smerek sibling stuff you threw in there plus the Dasey fairytale was sososoCUTE! Fantastic work! I'll be sure to check out your other story in a bit. :)
~Symone

aw i really liked the story that they told

Aw, that was cute! I like the idea of Derek as a dragon. Very fitting.

So great it was lovely :D I liked it very much because it was sweet and fun and all that :D Good Job.

Aw, so adorable! ^^ Loved it!

loved it!