It definitely doesn't suck, hon. Very good job on the rewrite. :)

Good God! I think that rewrite was great! Wish it was me, though...

HELLO THERE I HAVE JUST READ YOUR STORY AFTER THE SUNSET I THOUGHT IT WAS WELL WRITTEN HAVE YOU WRITTEN ANYMORE VAMP STORYS I WOULD LOVE TOSEE MORE STORYS ESP WITH JOHN CENA,MARIA AND MICKI JAMES

Samoa Joe?!

Damn, this is going to be more and more interesting now...I can't wait to read more!

Wow! Joe was a twist that I didn't see coming. He's probably one of the only Samoans in the business that's NOT related to The Rock, but it was good twist and he's a really kickass one to have chosen as his son. Great job on this!

Can not wait to read When Darkness Falls. Really looking forward to seeing what will happen next!

HOLY **! HOLY **! HOLY **!

BEST CHAPTER YOU HAVE WRITTEN! And not just because it's a cliffhanger...although, damn! Cliffhanger! I swear to God, you are such a good writer because in the beginning, I was ready to cry, and by the end, I was sitting on the edge of my seat, biting my nails. If I wasn't at work right now, I would have been screaming, lol.
Oh my God, poor Meadow! Those guys need to get their asses in gear and rescue her, and I am going to be on pins and needles until they do!
Holy crap, now I am so jacked up; I can't WAIT for the sequel!
Awesome work; I LOVED this story!
(And sorry about all the exclamation points and capital letters; it's all the caffeine and adrenaline, lol)

I didn't see that coming at all. LOVE IT!

Aww man, why did you have to do all that to them. Now I'm crying because I have to wait for the sequel:( Please assure me that things will be alright, despite what happened in this chapter. I'm just so devestated to be honest with you but at least now the son has been revealed and hopefully Dave and the others will find her and break the damn curse already^^

Oh dear Christ, did not even consider this as a possibility--KUDOS for the best swerve EVER!
Holy CRAP! What's Med going to do? If the baby's Dave's, that's cool...but what if it's not?
GREAT GREAT CHAPTER! PLEASE update soon!

Wow. Now that's a curveball! Loving this and can't wait to see what happens next!

To be honest, I had a feeling you were going to make Meadow pregnant. It is a definite great idea in terms of drama because I would assume like myself, other readers are wondering and knew that there were two possible fathers. I am hopeful that it turns out well, but I am still more focused on them breaking the curse together and Dave becoming normal again. Great work^^

Fantastic as always. Looking forward to the next chapter. Keep it up, your the bomb!!

I damn sure hope that its Dave's baby.
Great chapter ;)

I'm just wondering who the baby's daddy is...

Wow! Hot stuff. Can't wait for more!