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Marzan
2009-11-26 . chapter 7
LOL. This is some really funny stuff. Now you just have to take it all the way till the birth of the baby
The Misty Forest
2009-10-20 . chapter 7
The last part is EPIC
I can't stop ROFL, really
sakR9
2009-09-30 . chapter 7
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... I think that is officially the most and loudest I've ever laughed at a fanfic.

YOU ROCK! xD!

lol!
Lafine
2009-09-27 . chapter 7
ROTFL Oh God, poor, poor Alto. The last dialogue is pure win XD
Saphreeze
2009-09-19 . chapter 7
This is just FANTASTIC. I started giggling before I even got to the second half. Knowing Sheryl, there was no way she'd be the one getting bullied. Yet, actually reading the last part and that beautiful paragraph describing the hurt "woman" was the icing on the cake.
Clow Angel
2009-09-15 . chapter 7
HAHAHAHA! Oh, poor poor Alto!

"I AM the husband."

What have you done to our Alto, Sheryl?!

That was hilarious. I seriously thought they were having some really really good sex or something.
chiibiisuke
2009-09-05 . chapter 7
HAHA! omg! nice one!! xD
thanks for the upload! =)
love ya to bits!
someone179
2009-09-05 . chapter 7
lmao :D
Fostersb
2009-09-04 . chapter 7
Oh boy, what was Sheryl doing to Alto? But it could be that Sheryl would go to jail if she really beat him up:(
sakR9
2009-07-23 . chapter 6
zomg hot
:D!
.turtledork
2009-07-07 . chapter 6
On situation 4, the names of the staff! That made me smile :) Michel/Miyo :') so aw-worthy :') And Ranzou and Yasaburo's cameo at the end was a nice (super funny) touch XD

Situation 5 was was ridiculously hilarious XD Their whole conversation from start to end had me laughing so hard XD
Saphreeze
2009-06-27 . chapter 6
From an average Sheryl tantrum, to a lover's quarrel, and then things go swiftly down (up?) hill from there.

Love how it happened so suddenly yet so smoothly. I started giggling uncontrollably at the last couple of lines. =D
Attharun
2009-06-16 . chapter 6
lol. a pregnant Sheryl spells many different, unpredictable events. XD i have to pity Alto. i can actually imagine this being part of the "after series", if only the creators would get around to making one. the part with michel being mentioned, so sweet. ^^
Fostersb
2009-06-16 . chapter 6
The last two chapters were wonderful- I loved the tenderness when talking about Michel and Miyo. This chapter (situation 5) was so in keeping with how I picture the AruSheri relationship-the two pick fights but can't keep their hands off each other; that is true romance.
gppr
2009-05-01 . chapter 5
That was sweet. And for once, Alto doesn't get the short end of the stick. Heehee. A fight between Ranzou and Sheryl, that's something! I wonder who would win. :D
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