|Reviews for The Longest Battle|
| ElfenSky 2/24/13 . chapter 8
Ahhahaha, read through it, really funny! Sadly, short... but funny!
| Toirubira of Illusions 7/4/12 . chapter 8
Love it, please continue!
| Fuzzy Conchiita 2/11/12 . chapter 8
Love. This. Fanfic!
I just found it and this is cool! I mean, it does make me lol with some funny words and little surprise in every chapter, like unexpected ending, lol. Would you still update this fanfic? If it is yes, so I'll wait for it. If it is no, then I still add this to my fav list.
| GaurdianDevil 1/21/12 . chapter 8
wow whole series is simply awesome and extremely hilarious.
hope to see new chapter soon
| Nezuukun 8/15/11 . chapter 7
It took me a few moments to realise the husband was Alto xD
And LOL, I've been laughing out loud after I knew that and my mum thought I was crazy when she entered the room xD
But seriously man, nice story concept I like this!
| Princessa Rose Bernstein 6/1/11 . chapter 8
That was very hilarious! I think Alto is learning that pregnant women are pretty difficult to please, but one with Sheryl's personality is lethal. Please continue it as soon as you can. This fic goes to my Favorites.
| ljon 3/11/11 . chapter 8
Now I unterstand why Alto wish that child will bee boy. If it's girl then it is chibi-sheryl. I think alto did wish that moment that vjard could rip he's head off. Two sheryl's creepy. Update soon.
| BuRiChiFaN 2/13/11 . chapter 8
*dies of laughter*
man, that was hilarious again. , alto must've wished not to have sheryl pregnant again. that's one hell of an apetite! LMAO.
and then came alto's order...salad! ! L0LL0LLOL
for the umpteenth time, poor, poor alto...
i'm excited for the baby though. XD I Hope it's a chibi-sheryl. XDD how cute that'd be..XD
UPDATE! THANK YOU!
| BuRiChiFaN 2/13/11 . chapter 7
AHAHAHA! oh goodness! that was funny! ! XDDD
poor, poor, poor alto. XDDD sheryl sure is one hell of an amazon. i love her! XD
who was screaming? XDD i wonder if it was really sheryl. XDD
| BuRiChiFaN 2/13/11 . chapter 6
this one's so hilarious. alto imitating sheryl was funny! L0L.
well, both of em getting aroused is huge plus! XDD
| BuRiChiFaN 2/13/11 . chapter 5
L0L. sheryl was funny! XDD just poor alto.. had to put up with his wife's demands and mood swings. XDD
anyway, hoping these two ends up together at the 2nd film this 26.
ALTO x SHERYL FTFW! xD
btw, nice story. XD
| sakR9 1/12/11 . chapter 8
Haha, I guess the bill will kill any appetite Alto might have left after the tiny salad.
I liked this one too
| sakR9 1/12/11 . chapter 7
This is such pure pure win I can't even say anything.
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| Mcspender 11/22/10 . chapter 7
Aparently, the "pritty princess curse" is still on full force on poor little ol' Alto.
Cool fic D!
| David Shigure 11/21/10 . chapter 8
This was awesome! Loved it (:
Can't wait for more!