OMG I love it so far! Please please please keep going!

Whoa it just keeps getting better! This story is frigging awsome! I love it! I really hope Matt & Mel end up happy together! PLEASE write more soon!

Aw, Matt! You wanna be sweet and loving to the poor guy, but you have to be stern and mean, that's how you get it done! :D Poor Lucas is so innocent in all of this. And i hope either Jeff or Shannon one pays Mel back. :D Ok, all joking aside, I feel so bad for these two! I want them to fix everything and I almost wish it would end right here with Lucas happily leading the way, lol. However, I have a feeling there's plenty more drama in the midsts, am I right? I hope so..no I don't, happy ending! Yes I do. LOL. This is so good. You write these guys so amazingly! Matt especially. You really capture his whiny smartass attitude, XD! Kidding. But you really do capture him. this story is so great...you make me wanna a write a darkfic!! :D

Oh my gosh!! This is so heartbreaking. Used to, the thought of Matt Hardy committing suicide in his hot tub was hilarious cause, well, it's Matt. But you just had to make it sad! :"( This is so good! Like, that's the only word I can describe it cause it's amazing. Poor Melony, the pill popper. ;) Kidding. But seriously, I feel bad for her. These two need some serious counseling or something. I love the fact that they are each others demons. It's so romantic in a way, you know? That was a heartbreaking scene, by the way. This one line here;

Her first thought was that he was dead.

Her second thought was that she wasn’t ready to live her life without him.

Oh my god, that almost brought tears to my eyes! :( Forgive the rushed review, I'm hurrying to read the next chapter!

WOW! This is awsome! I love it! You're not like some of those writers who can't write for for **! Mad kudos five timesa over!

Oh please Please PLEASE write more only 2chapters and I'm tottally hooked!

Haha! That's to brootifurl! Yeah, it's not fair Mel wears Prada, she should buy Shannon some! :P Nuh-uh, he's perfect. :D This is really so sad in a way. I mean, I wanna make fun of Matt and call him pathetic, but I love him like a bro so I can't cause...well, it's so realistic. lol! I really hope Mel can bring him out of his funk, AND take away his Grey Goose and teach him to drink like a man! Poor Matt. His bedroom scene broke my heart. :'( Post more soon! I know you have like, three more chapter of this. POST OR DIE!! This is so good. I love Matt/Mel, and I want Matt to be his clubbin' self again.

P.s. A mud derby? XD! Genius. You have to do a pig pickin' next!!

Wow! You realize there was basically NO dialogue whatsoever, right? That's great! It's hard to do, to. I mean, I had to praise you on that before saying...

OMFG MATTANGST! *teary eyed* That's so sad, and yet SO accurate. You write him greatly, you know that right? He's an ** and then gets all mopey about it. I can't believe you've kept this hidden from me! DAMN YOU! And I can't believe you would post such a short FIRST CHAPTER! *kicks* You know I love this because you know how much I love seeing inside the secret life of Hardys. I have a feeling Jeff and Shannon are cooking up something Matt isn't going to like...or is he?? Cause I'm guessing it involves a certain lady friend of Matt's...or does it??

Come on! Post another chapter!! I WANT SOME MATT/MELONY LOVING!