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Reviews for: Steps to Success
EmmettMcFly55
2009-01-01 . chapter 2
Good chapter! Ron is really mean. What does being Class President have to do with being popular, anyway?

It's good that you had George win! He really did make good suggestions!
Freebird87
2008-12-23 . chapter 1
I almost cried when Lorraine said she didn't think her father loved her. Sam does seem like the type to love his kids, but have trouble saying it.
D.J. Scales
2008-12-04 . chapter 1
now this sounds like something to think about and something very well written.
EmmettMcFly55
2008-12-04 . chapter 1
Good story. Poor Lorraine. Her father was really ** her, but from the movies, I had the feeling she didn't really bother. To read her cry like that... well, I really feel bad for her!
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