*sniffle* I-*SOBB* I'm sorry, give me a mintue...that was so sad...

This...was so sad! It made me want to cry, which is saying something because I never cry. xD.

It was so good, and even though you killed poor Jake and made poor Will kill himself I like it. xD.

Well done on this. One of the best Brothers Grimm works out there!

A great story. Very good.

OMG! *shakes head in shock* Wow. That was epic. I liked it though. Dying Jake. Suicidal Will. Yikes. Interesting idea, and I loved the opening into Will's thoughts.

- pj

Gods...

Normally, I'm pretty good in keeping me tough while reading sad stories, but that last sentence...

It killed my resistence and made me cry.

I think this is a really sad, but most of all beautiful tear-jerker for everyone who reads it. Keep on going!

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