I liked this. There really should be more Lindsay/Daniel fanfiction out there. I never considered Daniel's talk in Study Hall really being an ulterior motive though he was acting strange. I can see that now that I think about it. Nice job, hope you add more to the Freaks and Geeks section!

I like the way you write Daniel. It's so in character for him. He thinks he is so sneaky, I enjoyed when Lindsay called him on it. I also liked her thinking process at the beginning.

I'm glad you decided to try a Freaks and Geeks for your first story. You are right. There really needs to be more fan fic for this completely awesome series. I think you are off to a good start. Your inner dialogue for Lindsay at the very beginning was absolutely spot on. I like the potential for Daniel and Lindsay and I can't wait to see where you take them in future chapters!