I thought this was a great take on the pairing. After seeing that part, my mind went crazy and I just had to see if there was a fic about 23/Max. I'm glad I did and found this. :D

Ya know, I'm not into slash but after seeing the movie even I thought there was some chemistry between 23 and Max. The two would've made an excellent pair.

I tried searching other 23xMax fics but no such luck. Anyway, good job and thanks for writing one.

hehehe nice story. but it was a little sad though.

23/Max is my favorite pairing of the movie...but this is the only fic of this pairing in existence (to my knowledge). thanks for the story. write more please!

I have to idmit I was at first uncomfertable reading this story, but then after I read it I enjoyed it. Good job, cool story. Only watched the show once, a few episodes on the season one dvd, but it was cool anyway.

I just saw the movie on DVD and U think you wrote Max's feeling perfectly

Okay, I'm no fan of slash but I had to give you a chance and in truth, it was an interesting take on the train track moment and beyond.

"Emotions were trivial, always deciding the path for us." Good line and terribly true.

eww...

this is like -- disgusting.

Don't ruin one of my favorite shows as a child with this sort of dreck.