...Hahahaha... Didn't expect any of that!

Well written! Fun read!

oh my.
I just loved those last lines.
It would have been kinda interesting though, to see the doctor's reaction when he found out that Niou played him...

The sheer force of all the different underlying layers in your fic is amazing. Which Niou is the real Niou, is what I keep wondering until the end. Alas, it's a truth that we'll never know. Beautifully written with an excellent characterization of Niou. I never would have imagined gentlemanly Yagyuu to blush and stutter, though XD.

-faves-

.moose

Hm, unusual, but I like it -cackles- Especially the end and Niou's personality xD

~PT