Marvellous work! Fabulous plot, excellent language and presentation and totally perfect characterizations! So wel done!

I liked the extended version much much more.. :)

the short version confused me...

I loved the fic, great job! :)

aw that was cute... i love this pairing.

It did amuse. I found it cute and I love this pairing.

xD
I enjoyed this greatly, and I'm glad for the extended version. It's genius, that's what it is :D

I just wonder who frightened Shuuei more: Kouyuu or the man who taught him to be so frightening - his father. Looks like Kouyuu learned well from the master.

ah...that was really cute...strange and peculiar...but really cute. Koyuu is a real naughty scolar, isn't he now.

This is hilarious. I like it. XD