:O wowie! Go lavi!! At first i thought that was it then i gasped and scrolled up to make sure and then i sighed again only in relief! YAY! its awesomeness! I cant wait for the up coming fun!!

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wow, a **-Kanda! interesting, hope you update soon : D

Oh. I quite like this. The very idea of Kanda being a prostitute is so delicious. I'm very excited for the next update and to see where this goes!

I hope it comes relatively soon. Keep it up :D

You write well, so please keep doing so! I can't wait to see how Lavi will use Kanda's oh-so-flexible body~

You're not confident in your writing skills? Oh please. The idea, or at least the way you wrote it, was incredibly imaginative and funny. You didn't rush things or make stuff happen almost out of nowhere - you took your time describing the environment around the characters, the characters themselves (I could actually SEE Kanda doing all those contortions in my head, and I drooled) and what they're thinking - or rather, what Lavi is thinking.

After having just read an incredibly bad written fic, reading yours was like... I don't know, fresh air. Icy water to a person who's been lost in a desert. Something like that. XD

Until now, Kanda remained in character - how it should be. Not that you can't make him out of character; this is a fanfic after all, in your story you're allowed to do as you please with the characters. Still, many people often go too far and end up having a crappy story, because ALL their characters are extremely lovey-dovey or just plain stupid, and only their actions are described. Their thoughts, if mentioned, are just... dumb.

BUT! this fortunately doesn't seem to be the case, because I noticed that your writing style would naturally not allow something like that to happen. This means that, no matter what you write, I'm sure it'll be good and the story will remain interesting.^^

I just hope that Kanda will swat away Lavi's hand, call him 'baka usagi' and then proceed to punch him in the face. XD or not, but i still think that scene's funny. ^^

Also, I checked your profile out of curiosity and found out that you're like me! We're both fans of Gaara! hehehe ^^ and you too have discovered the world of yaoi and become addicted.

So, don't worry about your writing skills, they're fine. Well, you can always improve, I think, though I'm not an expert and so I can't tell you how ^^, but you're good. So have a little more confidence, please? And update soon.

Really, please, update soon.

~Silence

Love it~
Please update soon!

You're a really good writer! (and I love this story already ;P)

Ohoho, how will Lavi make use of Kanda's flexibility~?

Can't wait for the next chapter~

I mind~ I want an update soon! I want to see how Kanda and Lavi interact!! it's just very tempting... Kanda doing yoga is hot!! Arousing to think how he do in bed...haha!!


So pls do update this soon!

BADASS!

haha. This is a great start :D
I love the idea of the story too.

Youre writing skills are awesome, just to let ya know :)
I was very impressed.