Just a heads up, The F-22 Raptor has no carrier landing capabilities therefore it'd never take off from a Carrier. Other than that was a great story

An exciting story with a good ending that stays true to the original. My only nitpick is the F-22 but otherwise great.

Yukikaze really deserves more attention, and I appreciate the fact that you follow the technical language of it so well. Also, the ending lines of this do a good job of creating that eerie atmosphere. I really wish there were more support for these stories.

I hope Mr. Martin Baker works and your pilot rides the rocket chair. Has he reached for his alternate ejection handles yet?

Good story. I would like to see more.

KW

This is a fast-paced story. It is very interesting to be so involved in a story! I hope you continue with this story. :)