Very romantic moment

one of the best I've read. Great job, honey.

aw...aw...aw

very cute, just to let you know though, when you selected the characters who were involved in this story you meant Lily Potter and James Potter, not Lily Luna Potter who is Harry's child Lily. I know it's confusing. =)

When I saw who it was between, I knew that had to be a mistake because Harry's kid Lily and her brother fic is just wrong.. or her grandfather. lol. just letting you know =)

Cute!

Wow! That was quite a piece of writing! It so well written, I love it :)

Aw I loved it! I am in love with your James, after glimpsing him for even the briefest of moments in this ficlet. It was beautifully written. I loved how James's cockiness comes out in the end and how he's so honest with her, it's so sweet.
Hazelmist

Very nicely written and well-thought-out. And sexy, of course. The verb tense kinda put me off though...
Nice work.
Anna

I like how the flow melds, a sort of timelessness you're talking about.

AW! It's so adorable!

Wonderfully and effortlessly sweet.
It makes me feel all mushy and happy inside.

It is so nice to read a James/Lily fiction after all this time. And the characters are spot-on-amazing. James is soo cute, in all senses of the word!

Thank you. That was lovely. You have a wonderful writing style. :)

Aww that was beautiful.
I absolutely loved it!

Absolutely brilliant! you're a WONDERFUL writer.

Aw...very pretty. :)

I'd love to not be a dunderhead and leave you a comment that's actually worth reading (-collective gasp-) but my brain's retarded right now and there's nothing else TO say.

This was just so *pretty.* You write well. A very sweetly intimate moment captured with sheer perfection.

Thanks so much for posting.

Cheers.
X

Love,
Zay

Wow. Perfection, that's what this is.