Beautiful.

i really really liked that one. i've always thought there should be more to the whole "Tanya expresses intrest in Edward" thing than Stephenie Meyer explained, and this was a great interpretation. nice job =)

This is a very complex short story. Bravo! I almost like Tanya now and Edward was spot on.

Beautiful!
You had me at "Oscar Wilde" in your author's note. I'm fascinated by the man.
And I liked the interaction between Edward and Tanya! It's not as bad as it may seem, especially if you read that tiny bit in Midnight Sun. They seem to get along just fine. She just can't help the way she feels about him.
Loved the way Edward interpreted Wilde's quote. Thinking about the whole mistake he made with Tanya.
Great job!

This was really good. Great job! (: This was great.

Angelica

Really good, very well written. The way you decoded Edward and transcripted everything that forms him, every little piece of it, is, without any doubt, divine. Tanya is really good too, I actually like her as a character, and you just made her even more likeable. Congrats.

Wow, that was both humorous and lovely. You write the characters beautifully, even if, truth be told, little can be understood about either Tanya or Edward from the original novels.

Good job. This is definitely a fave.

Even if you DID ruin Little Women for me. (:

I actually wouldn't mind if Edward liked Tanya as well as Bella, especially if Bellas a vampire at the time too! Through the whole story, I kept thinking Bella would show up as a vampire! The story is still good though!

I've already read this on LJ but reading it again was so good. Amazing covers it in one word :)

brilliant, well written ... i like it a lot :) ...

I want Jasper and a starry sky! lol

Anyway, I really enjoyed this. I crave Tanya/Edward fics!
I think their playful and slighty-awkward relationship is just perfect. :)

oh what a treat!

I love the way she uses his mind reading to tease him, the interaction between the two. I just love your writingand the ring of authenticity I can always count on.

Wow. This was really amazing. You really do "get" Edward, and I loved this glimpse of him pre-Bella. It all just makes a lot of sense, and I could absolutely see this leading into Twilight. And now I have to read Edward WITH Bella... so off I go to your next story.

That seemed very realistic, I have to admit. Edward didn't want her, but...

I guess I'd get tired of being lonely too. And Edward is in a worse boat than the rest of us - not only does he SEE it, he has to HEAR it too. That must get very tiring. Really.

I liked it. Tanya amused me.

-Eve

Delicious. Wistful. Lovely. Yes, I believe those are the right words. I do love the way you write Edward, but his character is so similar to Remus, you see. *sigh* Is there any wonder I love to read your writings?

However, for now, I'll take a Jasper, if you please. There is just simply something about a tortured soul that I so love...


~Michelle