This is beautiful. I loved it, very well written and sweet.

aw, so cute. U r so creative to think of all that

Wow nice story! When I was reading this I was thinking of what it would be like from Bella's perspective. What it was like to experience renesmee's "visions". So, I was wondering if you would give me permission to use your story as an insperation to a story that I will write from Bella's perspective. Of course I will give full credit for the idea to you. :D

I really like all of your stories by the way.

xxMargiexx

that was so brillant! it was so well written and very touching

Great interpretation... thank you!

That was beautiful.

Thats the only word I can think of to describe it. Sorry, your story deserves much more. :)

Yasu

Wow, this is great. :D

OMG I LOVE IT

that was good...are you going to write more? I would like for you too. you are a very good writer.