Cute, I like it :-)

You left out one word, it should be second degree burns not second burns but overall the story is really good. I like to see Trek showing just what he has in his head. Now how about one about good ole Duke boy?

Great story loved it. I sounded really intune with show and i would love if their was a sequel. keep up the good work and good job.

Cute story. I actually just re-watched the earthquake machine episode the other day at and this fic really made me smile. Great job!