Damn good story, best one with Todd and Sheppard I've read so far. And the way you made them frienemies was brilliant. Good work ^^

great story. really really great

Excellent story. Your characterisations are really true to form and you descriptions are great - I felt as if I was there watching these events unfold. Well done and thanks for sharing the story.

awesome, thanks for the read.

Great Story! very well written...its hard finding good stories with Todd =)

There's very little I can say that hasn't already been said. Beautifully written, evocative and bang-on characterisation. Good stuff.

okay, it was a well written story, and quite a good plot but i think it would've been more enjoyable if you had broken it up into chapters instead of one long page. other then that, great job!!

awesome, loved it!!
I love your writing.

*Giggles excitexdly* That was the best ever! Is there a sequel? I really hope there is, it was so awesome!
John is the greatest and so is todd. *Grins* Oh and should add Todd as a character on the list thingy for Stargate Atlantis, don't you agree? =P

Awesome story! It was a pleasure to read

wow, this fic was pure gold!

I like how you used common Ground in it and how original it was. The characters were pretty well portrayed as well and I liked the part where they're asking to each other how many people they killed: i was very deep.

But most of all, I have to admit I adored the whump in it, seriously i was better and different than what I am used to see on

great work, I faved the story and will of course read more of your work!

This was really good! I think you really captured the essence of Sheppard/Todd's relationship. I especially like the parts where Sheppard kept waiting for Todd to feed on him and the bonding over Kolya's death.

Oh, I loved this! Thank you so much for the Todd fic! And some good "quality" time for the "brothers". Thank you, thank you, thank you!

Great story! I loved every part of it. Good work.

I'm glad to see yet another story about Sheppard and Todd. As I told another author, the relationship between Sheppard and Todd is an interesting and complicated one. It takes an insightful author to bring that out. Good story.