I loved this story, but I think it's better left that way :)

good story. please do a sequel and bring back eva. please please please.

*insert offical request for sequel here :D*

Thats the end? How can that be the end, how is it possible that he changed back to a human?

Ahh this can't be the end

SEQUEL REQUESTED!

he is a human again? wow this just keeps geting more interesting! can't wait for more!

Update soon!

OMC!

poor Adam!

wats gonna happen?

keep going!

mwa xox

WOW! sorry those are my only words!

Oh I want to know what happens.. Excellent story, keep up the good work!

awsome but did u have to make him a werewolf now?

I'm sorry but this has just gotten monumentally weak. Not only can our dearest Adam not handle himself in a fight due to his "paragon of goodness" grief crap that he feels bad about killing people that are doing their best to kill him, but now he'll have some sort of negative repercussion from his stupid actions that will undoubtedly get overly complicated and needlessly dramatic.

all of that superfluous vampiric prowess and yet he still remains so contemptibly weak. Monster indeed

awsome keep going ! wats going to happe?

Aww. Poor kid. I hope everything turns out okay for him. I like how you are changing things for him, since he's not a typical vampire. It makes sense that he would react differently to injuries than a normal vampire. And I can't wait to see where you take it. Is he going to revert to being human? Is he going to make a full recovery? Or not? Mm-hmm. You have me wondering. :)