I really loved this. I can just see Merlin standing outside Arthur's door weighing the need to be seen as he is against the damage he could do to Arthur if he confessed. Merlin's last line is particularly beautiful. Would love to see another sequel.

Beautiful.

This was just brilliant!
The ending was really poignant; very well written, with great characterisation. You seem to understand the characters better than many on here!
I love your writing style - well done on a superb story!
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