Good story.

it's a little weird, i dont think she'd so easily say "i love you, duh". anyway, it was a cute fic :D

"He then did something she never expected him to do. He threw his arms around her and pulled her into a tight embrace."

Aw.

very very sweet. i absolutely loved reading it :)

OMG I can't wait for more. Its so good

Ok so that was a sweet scene between Carson and Elizaneth :) (and i'll overlook the fact that in fact John *has* played chess with Rodney)

aww and a sweet ending for the chapter to :)

sparkly

Very sweet frienship and nicely done.

and so evil! humph i want the last two chapters :)

Sparkly (logged in under the SA lol)

i was about to *sque* but when i read he didnt came willingly .. oh dear. stunned and strapped to the bed? hmm. please update soon ;;)? [:d]

aww, he opened his eyes. yess!

lets just hope he doesnt do something stupid..

Ooh! Very nice sis! i like what you wrote, hope your update is coming soon ;)

This is getting more and more interesting. Nice story!

nice. more action! more sparkyness! more LORNE! lol cant wait for more :)

*squee* finally! :smirk: great! now what :D?

Cool! Don't leave it hanging to long! You'll kill me!

Oh. nice. cant wait for the rest.

More please? I do like john lost and found stories. Oh, but one little thing. Average height - Oh I don't think so. Now, long legs yes!

omg :

damn, i read this in the morning, and i'm gonna have to wait till tomorrow to read the 2nd chapter. *facepalm*

hey :D brunette you say, eh?

goody goody.

does he remember anything of his previous life? :-s