 loha 10/14/06 . chapter 1 good. |
 hatsuharuluva181 4/1/06 . chapter 1nice! |
 SaphireCatElf 6/25/05 . chapter 1different... |
 americananime 4/28/02 . chapter 1KAWAIII! *goes SUPERHYPERCHIBI MODE* P#34r t#3 k4w4ii. |
 Lily C 1/16/02 . chapter 1I just realized I never did get the real review for this posted after you finished Only Second Best. Sorryyyyyyyy!
I liked this although I think the idea of adfult hood being achieved on a specific day a bit Anthropomorphic. The idea of maturation being the result of a calender change seems limiting. Suppose the puckworld race only became mature instead after some sort of physical metamorphosis?
Suppose it could be defined, but not prerdicted? How would that affect the teen-age psyche?
But this is a good and genuine attempt to portray an important moment, even IF some things negver change. |
 Journey Kayla 12/11/01 . chapter 1 This is awesome! |
 Otaku Tess 12/4/01 . chapter 1 That was quite cute. Grin's comment was perfect. Woo. Been a long time since I've seen Mighty Ducks. |
 Readasaur 12/1/01 . chapter 1 "Hoo-boy" is right. Nose Dive, an adult? *SCARY!* |
 Taa 11/26/01 . chapter 1Aaahhhh...welcome to the future! Cool-ness. Nifty little tradition they've got goin' there. Well done. |
 Shootingstar478 11/26/01 . chapter 1 PRETTY GOOD! :9 |
 Taiora Daikari 11/25/01 . chapter 1 WOW! MEZZA' LIKE! DO MORE! MY FAV CHARECTER IS DUKE! But then there comes Nosedive,Mallory, and Wild wing. Coolola story idea! _
Ty: -_- don't mind my little sis (This is Prince Tyler Briefs) and her mindless ramblings. Cool story PalliponStar! *sits and waits for her to finish 'Only Second Best'. |
 Nightbloom 11/25/01 . chapter 1Aw.. I like this one! It's cute! Actually, I have a "coming of age" sorts of thing planned for Nosedive myself... however... that won't be till virtual season 3. Here's a big clue though, it has something to do with the conversation Canard and Wildwing had as kids in my stories. *evil laugh* |
 Kaeera 11/25/01 . chapter 1That was quite different, Pappy...I'm used to your humor stories, but I must say, I like this one, too! It's great! I mean, how did you get the idea of Ducainian?*sighs* I wanna have some ideas, too...have to write something! |
 WildfireFriendship 11/24/01 . chapter 1 That was too cute for words. |
 Lily C 11/24/01 . chapter 1 The review is ready but ya don't get it until; "Only Second Best" is finished. NYERRNR,NYERRNR,NYRE, NYERRNR... |