Omg i must say this is a beautiful story. The love was much stronger myers version

Well, for one thing I want to congratulate you for finishing this beautifully written story. Can't say that I love every plot lines you know. I have moments that I just want to hunt you down for all the horrible thing and sometimes I just want to hug you silly. I really hate the rape scene. You wrote it like it was a common thing and it's ok to not be sad about it. I can handle a few deaths. And I really don't agree with you about your statement that you think Edward's and Bella's lives were too perfect so you decide that you want to give them marital problem. Really! I think it's hardly fair. You know first Bella got sexually assault and she was force to witness her mother got rape. And then Edward whipped her, plus that horrible Lord Cullen beat her almost to death. And not to mention that Bella got raped many times. And Bella and Edward almost lost their daughter. I don't know dude. You have a very strange perspective about happiness. Don't they deserves a little a happiness? But I'm happy that Alice junior still got her HEA.

Loved it! Thanks so much for sharing!

Their moods are all over the place. I can't read anymore, it's giving me whiplash.

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I just really wanted to say thank you for entertaining me with such a spectacular story. I've done nothing but cry at many of your stories so far and adore you for this. You've got talent darling, so you better keep up the good work or i shall have to write you a very angry review. (just joking).

Vampire Heart really touched me. In the past i have read some human-as-slaves-rulled-by-vampire stories but they hav'nt quite ... whats the word... kept me intrigued in their plot... well they kinda sucked. They lacked detail and to be honest it seemed like the author was'nt putting in any effort into thier stories. Unlike you. (It sounds like im kissing up but i promise im not. Ok maybe just a little bit.)

Alice's death had me in tears and i love how Bella is still this stubborn girl but matures as the story line prgresses. I loved the playfull sexual banter between Edward and Bella- tears of laughter were streaming down my cheeks.

You give such great detail in your work and its clear that you're obviously passionate about your stories. My whole easter holiday is crammed with doing nothing but reading your stories. Im fairly new to but you are one author that has stood out for me. Thanks for that :)

You, Darling, are amazing. You give me the courage and strength to want to publish my work on here so thanks :)

All my love and God Bless

Sahara Fall x

J'ai adoré votre histoire, vos personnages avec chacun une personnalité que j'ai aimé. merci.

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