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Ok?

Well uh. yeah I have no idea what the heck to say other than...yeah i got nothing.

I'm sorry, but that has to be the funniest thing ever written. I found this whole story HILARIOUS.

I'm sorry. I should be pissed at it and hate it for all eternity, but it was so goddamn funny.

Eat a cheeseburger, save a retard. LOL

Well, interesting choice of Author's Note, but I can't help but be reminded by the fact that Christianity is a RELIGION - a FAITH: this means that you can choose to believe in it if you want to. I personally am somewhat atheistic. That is my choice. And I don't need some naive little punce telling me what to believe:
"Don't you dare go around hating Jesus, or you'll go straight to hell."
What is THAT supposed to mean? Ever heard of forgiveness? (although, as nice an idea as it is, I'm afraid I don't believe in such things)...
Also, what connection is there between Judaism and Jesus? Jesus may have been a Jew, but as a Jew, you should ignore the idea of Jesus being the son of god (which I personally don't believe), and treat him just as another prophet, nothing more.

Also, nice as it is, (and I'm sure many of my fellow readers will agree with me) I don't need a lesson on what Jesus is and isn't. There's a new lesson that has been brought about recently, it's called RE. Also, we can (if we really wanted to) learn all we want to about him via the church.

Right. Glad I got that off my chest. I also need to advise you on your technique of flaming - it is unsupported and not necessary a lot of the time. Telling someone to quit writing... What does that mean? It's harsh, and if you wish to state faults in another's writings, give reasons why and state improvements. Also, if you complain about things in other people's work that you have done yourself, you will be a hypocrite.
For example, in "Echo the Hedgehog"'s writing, you stated that he should stop writing (and using a rather nasty word in the middle of it - somewhat unnecessary) and learn to write.
Look at the review I gave. THAT's how you write a review - by giving tips of improvement and encouragement.

Finally, when you do right those obscene remarks, your grammar and spelling is appalling. To get people to take you seriously, use them correctly.

Well, I've finished. Yet, I am still appalled by how you write to others - via review and in those 'stories' of yours. Get your act together.

This reminds me of religion. Funny, but none of it true. Not to say this was badly written, because I enjoyed it.

Cool story bro

Kick-ass epic. So kick-ass epic it's the shit, and shit's always a creative word, and makes things bad-ass, making people so speechless to the point they piss their pants. Kick-ass, bad-ass shit of all time epic.

EPIC

What the fuck is this shit?

It belongs with DA MASTAZ THO