Oh, this is a really interesting set-up! I love the idea of them being (semi-)criminals and kalsdjlasjd; *A* The writing is good, much better than the majority of fics on here, and the pace seems nice so far too.

I hope you'll update this if you can find inspiration again (as this a bit older already, I think) Keep up the good work. :)

This...is several different kinds of awesome all at once. The only error I've noticed in any of your wrighting is that you spell 'straight' as 'strait'. A strait is some kind of geographical feature so spellcheck doesn't pick up on it. The perfectionist in me wouldn't let that go.

You've got me hooked on this concept of the KH heroes being on the other side of the law.

Rawr FFnet! You ate half of my review D8

Gah, sorry Yondy. Stupid FFnet didn't post the second half of my review...*again* -.-

Ugh, it's really annoying to try to re-write all that you had already written, but I had basically also said that I thought that this plot was kickass, and I loved how you introduced all the charrys, and that I was looking forward to the next chappy! =3

Holy cow Yondy! This story iz so epic and win! 8D

I dearly heart the whole Roxas/Soras as twin brothers premise, in the fics that you write. It's just win :3

Dudez, this is BRILLIANT. ConArtists? Scams? Hitmen? EXPLOSIVES? Update soon! This is EPIC. I love the little scenes you have of each of them! XD!
God, I can't wait to see them all get together!!

I've got tricked my ^^ as they changed the style, I put it on my fav list. Well, not that it doesn't belong there as all your stories do, but I've made an habit of not putting the fics of my favorite authors in my favorite fic list. whatever XD

Anyway, great, great idea. It's a nice change to start with Sora and Roxas, for you I mean. Not that I disapprove of your devotion to LeonCloud of course XD

I love how you introduce each of them, brief description and their specialties, so like themselves. Though as Riku has only one specialty compared to Cloud, I hope you'll make him the best Cat-burgler, faor fairness ^^. But all their specialties are awesome, even if we haven't seen Sora's in action yet.

I love the extremely calm and casual and well, happy way, somewhat, you go about this. XD

And to finish, I love the general plot idea, of course. All of them working together on a scam just because, it's really kick **. especially since we still don't know it. Hope you won't turn it into something dramatic though. I mean, of course blood, violence, bruises are perfectly alright, but still on that casual "do what we want" way it's started ^^.

Anyway, great job, can't wait to read more ^^

Do not punish the brain! If anything, reward it! This is delicous and yummy and I'm getting a bit /too/ excited about the forthcoming interaction between Cloud and Leon after that teaser from Riku 8D

I love love LOVE the way that they accessed the profiles of the different characters; it was so inventive and I really did like it. The mini introductions of each character, showing them at work was eally awesome too and this is playing out like some sort of graphic novel in my head which I can see right before my eyes as I read it.

I really do hope you stick with this; it looks to be one of your best ideas yet :D Plus, you need somewhere to vent all the Leon/Cloud interaction, right? :P

oh em gee.

YAY! You expanded on Taxi and Roxas as a hacker? Perfection XD I can imagine him as one of those cute nerdy guys with the mad hax0r skilz.

Before I continue with the fangasming, I thought I should point out two typos:
"They were going to seal the largest diamond" - Steal perhaps? Or is the sealing a pivotal plot point? :P
"Riku had been, and is a bugler." - Riku is so sexy, he could be whatever he wants to be, even a bugler.

Anyway.

I love the mini-profiles as we encounter each character; it makes me feel as if I am in one of those films where the blue-y digital screen comes up and you've got the profile of each character spinning around while some computerized voice is reading out their details. It really adds a depth and sets the tone for the story.

I also like the friendship between Roxas and Riku; must people make it a hate-hate relationship but I like that they are friends.

Omg. I've just realised how awesome life will be once Leon & Cloud enter stage right. 8D Swet!