Aww, this story was just too cute.

Great job. =D

Claire is amazing!! Love her. Wonderful story.

I LOVED this! It was great! And I loved the ending. Great job! (:

Angelica

love love love this story! LOVE IT!

ONLY THING:
“Daniel, just because you had a wild youth and you have your father’s last name – and half his jeans – doesn’t mean you’ll let her down. Not if you really love her.”

Jeans= GENES! Unless you really mean half his pants...just a small tiny blemish on this beautiful, beautiful masterpiece :)

Keep writing!

Fireangel

So cool! It was so cute! And romantic and mushy and lovely!

~Chica~

I absolutely adore this story. It's like everything was perfectly wrapped in one great chapter. It was sweet and amazingly sexy (that kiss...wow!) and spot on. I hope you continue to write more stories! :)

Wow this story is totally awesome, your characterization of Daniel and Betty was spot on...I can see them doing all of that!
Great!

Great storie, whrite soon!

OMG... YEAH! Heck yes it is friday, and I am thrilled for them! WOW that was really good, I loved all the fluff at the beginning about Daniel not wanting to wake her up, and then the end was just plain HOT... and I agree with Daniel that was a very sexy line.. GO BETTY! Excellent story!

So sweet... :) You should continue this story i really like where it is going... if your not big into wrighting the steaming stuff you could always skip to the next morning or even monday and maybe do flashbacks...i duno. I really just trying to force my ideas on you-hope its working! ;)

Allykat

OMG! You totally made my day! After watching Tornado Girl, this is just what a girl should read!! OMG!! CLAIRE KNOWS, I SWEAR!! AND I KNOW, TOO!! It's DETTY LOVE! Thanks so much!! Good job!! MOre Detty from you, I hope!!

Wow! great fic!
“You haven’t slapped me; that’s a good sign, isn’t it?” I totally see him askig that! XD lol

As usual, you just have a really wonderful way of writing the Detty dynamic. I loved Claire's insight into Daniel's feelings for Betty and her encouragement of him. And I loved the whole build-up to the kiss, you created some really great tension and anticipation with that which just made the climactic moment of the kiss even better. I loved this! I can't wait to see what Detty fic you write next! Thanks so much :D

That was awesome! Hawt!! ;) Write more soon!! Whe! =D

I LOVE this, the story is excellent! And especially love this part: “Do you… want to make up for lost time?” she asked shyly and he could not help but chuckle at her, what she thought to be botched, attempt at being seductive. A look of horror flashed across her face and he felt her try to pull away, but held her too tightly for her to break the hold. “I’m sorry… I’m not very good–”

“That was the sexiest thing anyone has ever said to me, Miss Suarez,” he breathed into her ear, holding several tendrils of hair out of his way, making her shiver in anticipation.

Excellent!