AH! ok, so im not technically supposed to read new stuff till i've finished my own junk but still... it was so funny in sum places ;p...like where he starts walking towards zira..

n personally i think it'd be beta if u just left it as a oneshot. i've seen stuff where zira is turned in2 a girls etc. n if u left it like this, maybe change the ending a lil theni it'd be really short n sweet ^w^. But dont let me stop u writing if u wanna!

ok. gotta stop rambling..u made me write a HUGE review...n that's only coz u read my stuff!