What an awesome story! I have to say that I was so impressed with how much ground you were able to cover in relatively few words without really sacrificing depth. And I love the relationship you built for Chris and Victor. Your Leo and Wyatt are also very sophisticated - although they are both in the wrong (to a lesser and greater degree) you also show that they are human. Loved it!

Wow!

I loved this story. The depth, the darkness, the despair is just gripping.

I'm truly impressed by this. Especially considering you mention English not being your native language. You have nothing to worry about, the syntax, spelling and grammar are all perfect.

I have absolutely no complaints about this whatsoever. I am, however, not talented enough with words to express exactly how much I love this story.

Well done on a truly incredible piece of writing.

wow that was awesome , pretty well written & so realistic in explaining chris's futur & his relationship with all his family members specislly his grandfather ,good job