nice.

Agreed and well done.

Sweet and bittersweet. I think this defines reaping what you sow. If you so the wind you reap the whirlwind.

Totally Severus! Except I think that being over there might have soften him a bit. I don't think Lily would stay mad at him for long.

Usually there is more than one scene but this was excellent.

Most excellent beginning!

aw. this story is so cute. i love it!

i absolutely loved this story!! the plot is great and the characters are pretty real! i hope u write even more sories because youre great! :)

This was great. I loved it. I was searching for Petunia stories and saw this. I didn't even realize that it was your story until your a/n in ch. 4 where you said that people were discussing your longer stories. I love your longer stories, i don't know why i never read this one, it was great! i loved that you included Snape and James. i had expected just Petunia's family, Lily and her mom and dad. James was a good touch, you wrote him well.

I like it. I think I like most stories where Dudley does teh right thing. This one starts out as giving him the footing to do so.

Great concept and wonderfully done.

Of all the characters you wrote, James is my favorite. Lily's section is beautiful, and Snape's is just the right mix of practical and acerbic, but James feels alive like no one else in the story. Petunia's reactions feel right, in that they're all for her son and still focused on a way to one-up Lily and Harry and the rest of the "freaks," but... James Potter isn't even a favorite character of mine and that depiction was fantastic. Great story, great job!

I loved your story! I liked getting into Petunia's head. I really like the way you characterized her. I can see her doing what she had to to help Dudley, even if it helped harry too. Thanks for the great story :)

This was a great story.

Excellent story!