I swore to myself several times while reading, mostly because of Luna's comedic realizations, etc, etc. You characterized her well in such a strange situation, and you also did quite well with Neville too. The sex education seemed to be inserted at every turn.

Oh more more more!

Lovely!

I loved it!!

it was hot and funny, but above all very sweet.
Keep up the good work

poor Neville, you did an excellent job writing them both! Great job

I really, really liked this. I think you captured both of their personalities perfectly, to Luna's dreamy matter-of-factness, and Neville's shy awkwardness. Also, it was quite hot! XD I hope you write more with these two as a pair, since you did such a good job on this.

You should definantly write another one. It was really good. I love how Luna is so, well, Lunaish.

It's pretty sweet. I loved how Luna managed to get Neville over his insecurities.

Luna is slightly disturbing but interesting ficlet.

that was perfect, and beautiful. so realistic for post DH. you have neville and luna spot-on in character. neville's awkwardness is very sweet, and luna is hilarious.

i hope you write more.

wow very hot!!

Oh, what a lovely story! Luna is just the sort to do something like this (and then decide she wants to keep a baby after all if she didn't think about contraception. After all, how hard can a baby be after taking care of Xenophilus for so long?).

Neville should have been a gentleman and invited her to shower with him.