This is a pretty great idea. It's just written in a somewhat confusing manner. But if you keep writing, I'll keep reading. It's pretty funny so far. Oh, and please don't add in any cheesy Fax/Max. If you ask me, that's an awful pairing. Figgy forever! Sorry if my opinions annoy you, or my criticisms...

You are my new best friend.

XD This story is great! I like it! Update soon!

it has the potential to rock hard but not yet please add more!

A great story. Very funny.

I never saw Chowder, but still LOLd at this!

that was so funny! OMG max was so mean about grave dancing total, but it was also REALLY funny! Good job!