Hey this story ISN'T crap at ALL! This really good especially 4 a faithshipping fan like me. I was surprised when Ruka asked Aki about what's the first thing she notices about the opposite sex...Anyways good job 10/10!

YOU SHOULD'NT RUN YOURSELF INTO THE STORY WAS'NT CRAP IT WAS SHOULD BE PROUD OF YOURSELF AND YOUR STORIES(I HOPE THAT LAST SENTENCE MAKES SENSE)

Whe! Yay!

BTW: Why does Akiza always do the disclaimer with you?

OMG! THIS IS LIKE YOUR BEST STORY EVER, I mean besides Team Mode, that was your best story. Still I loved this story so much, Great job!

This was awsome same goes wit rainy days u should make chapters

It's not crap! It was really good! Please right more!

I thought it was really really good-it's not crap at all! I loved it all the way! Loved it when Aki made Rua shut up- I've got nothing against the cute little guy, but he needs to shut up every once and a while..."

I thought this was pretty good, not crap

Awesome Story. The stormy weather thing really gave it it's (how do i say this?) emotion. This could spark a very good sequel. Only complaint: None lol.

I love this story so much and it's so funny to)

Ok, I'm in love with this story! It made my heart melt and it gave me a few laughs too! Can you PLEASE make a sequel?

Simply amazing, from the moment in episode 15 that Yusei and Aki's eyes met, I knew that they were going to fall in love. they care about a each other a crap lot. Make a sequel.

that was romantic and sweetest YuseixAki moment I've ever read!

man twins can be so evil yet fun. :)

I'm adding this to my fav.

:3

greatest!

I..I love it! :3

I like the way Rua and Ruca were "working2 there!xDD

Evil Twins!xDD

FANTASTIC!

LIKE IT, LOVE IT!

JUST GREAT!

But i think Yusei's personality was more calm and straight, but i think it's normal because when u're alone with the girl u love, u're personality would be changed(sometimes)...

anyway 5 starz!