So...
was their child born?

And you almost made me cry, and I would have except for the fact their were other ppl in da room with me

I would love to have read this as a chaptered story, but the One-Shot keeps it...angsty.

Loved it :)

Poor Leah! What happened to the baby? Did she lose it? O_O

I actually likes this

so sad, but you did a great job

GOD, that was depressing. Amazing, and deliciously angsty, but still utterly depressing. Loved it. :)

Awesome work, i've tears in my eyes! Great job!

In the end, we all know, as fanfiction writers and readers, that Joacob would end up screwing over Leah just as Sam did. It's amazing how people put so much faith into a character like Jacob when trying to erase the Epic Failure termed Breaking Dawn whilst using character development from said Failure.

Leah is such an amazing character, but she is the secondary character in the story/movie/play which the author seems to use as a pin-cushion over and over again. And although she is a secondary character, Leah's doomed fate is the most interesting out of all the characters in the series.

This captures how Leah goes into everything so willingly hoping she will get her fairytale ending, on to fall victim to the Fates once again by another man she loves in the very same situation. It was so much deeper than Blackwater or Uleah; it showed Leah.

:) I prolly got everything so wrong! I think people need a wake-up call to Blackwater. Because Leah will truly fall down to the darkest caverns of her heart before finally getting what she needs to live.

Awesome

I like it a lot! I'm the type of person who likes happy endings, so although Jacob ended up marrying Nessie, I was pretty satisfied with it. Thanks for writing it! :D

awesometastic. i'm starting to like angsty jacob/leah. it's interestingly tragic, how tortured she is. :D

wow i really feel sorry for Leah. mady you could do a story where Jake brackes the imprent? i think that would make a good story!

"he stumbles into the room smelling like sex and HER and old sheets"

that part was really sad. i don't know why but that made me so mad at jake. this was so good and so sad.

fantastic.

OH, how depressing!

But good! I love Leah, she is so tragic...

That was beyong tragic. I don't get stories who can't give Leah a happy ending.