Wow..that was truly...magical. I hardly read anything apart from AH but this was just so good!

Wow, I liked it...

i saw this story rec'd on the telling you like it is podcast and just came right over to read it. i loved it, it was short and sweet and just perfect and so reminiscent of the original twilight... it just made me melt into a puddle! great writing!

This is perhaps the shortest, most glorious, thing I have ever read.

Your words speak volumes and your imagery leaps through the screen.

Loved it. I hope you write more.

This is one of the most beautiful things I have ever read. Your descriptions practically vibrate off the page in intensity. I don't think I breathed the whole time.

I am reading this after a recommendation on the podcast Telling You How it Is. I am so glad I did. It is short but achingly beautiful. There are phrases that I could pick out but it would be wrong as it stands, complete, whole and perfest.

Thank you for sharing.

I think I've reviewed this on livejournal.

But you deserve all the praise you can get. This is an absolutely beautiful piece. The writing is poetic but in a wonderfully subtle way.

The imagery is wonderful. I especially liked the bit about her hair being a 'dark bird on the pillow'.

Thank you for writing. =)

I know this isn't much in the way of a review, because I'm not feeling so incredibly articulate today.

But.

This is just fantastic.

The imagery is so incredibly lush and perfect.

The visual imagery you write in this is simply amazing. The piece is short but it doesn't feel short because every word means something, expresses something, fulfills its role. I especially love this: "he feels as if he is heading in the wrong direction" because it's such a direct way to describe their relationship, especially at that part in the series when feelings are still being explored and worked out. It's breathtaking, really, realizing that things matter only because you have someone to experience with... realizing that the only home you want to go back to is living and breathing and loves you back.

Beautifully written. You have captured the depth of emotion really well. Thank you.

Very cool! I liked it. It was interesting, and I really pity Edward right now. These kinds of stories always make me pity him. He's so confused... It's great!

-Eve

Ditto that...a really well written piece full of almost palpable emotion. Brilliant :)

This was great! :) I loved it.