Creepy story, loved it anyway. The way you described Lee while he was ripping out his heart was great, a little graphic, but great. Lee may not kill himself if gaara asked, but Im sure he'll kill himself if it stopped gaara from being killed.

Disturbing images is an understatement! It was very dramatic. I wouldn't worry too much about your troubled mind though.

O.O

eep.

have given the ultimate proof of Lee,s love for Gaara...but i must say it is very very sad also,loved your story

D: its so gory! But its still oddly in character for Gaara. At least before he gets his arse beat by Naruto that is XD

It's gorey and unexpected, yet fulfilling and satisfying o 0 Lee love's Gaara enough to kill himself? Well...I guess that's everlasting love then *sweat drop) Very angst, very nice XD

O.o ... Er... that sure was interesting! ;! For one I loved the thorough description! But I don't think Lee would, y'know, commit suicide cuz of just that... XD But it was sweet and Gaara was kept in character! XD Awesome job! XD

Wow, um, that was very interesting, and disturbing, and... sweet? I can actually picture Gaara's reaction, which makes it much sadder. I wonder what he will do when he realises that Lee can't love him anymore if he's dead...?

You could call it extremely dark humor...in an ironic sort of not funny way. Either way, congratulations, you have now achieved the status of Quentin Tarantino jr. Nice. Good job!

ah! i knew i shouldn't have read that! but i was like "meh, its my fav author, i should anyway" i dont totally regret reading it bc i love all ur work but that was very sad. i dont gaara would kill someone who loved him though. it wasn't my cup of tea but if it was i would have loved it! byou were very dscritive so i could picture all that was happening! *gross* nice job!

I found it kind humorous, maybe that's because my mind is almost as troubled as yours. No offense. xDD

Nice story, I totally understood where you were coming from with this one.

Yeah Lee committing suicide now, that I read it, sound very weird but puttin' himself in a hardly kept promise is Lee like.

They're a little bit weird anyway, is not your messy mind that tricks you!

Ithink that maybe Lee in this situation wouldn't do this but I think that Gaara would behave in this way.