O! Wonderful chapter!

My favorite line would have to be, "Not if we can surprise it.” Penelo said, then crossed her arms and winked at Balthier. “I think someone likes Jules more than he lets on.”

A very Penelo-like thing to say for her and Balthier's returning jab was completely in character for him.

Anyways, loving the story! I can't wait for your next update!

great chapter, with lots of excitement... and a few moments of hilarity. good work with the characters! they're witty and likable and all that good stuff, just like in the game. especially balthier. loved his last line. such a sky pirate.

This really doesn't get boring! You have written Jules and the others so well, their interaction and lines are just spot on!

"on the other hand, he’d heard that the guard in question had quite a thick skull." aw...Carter! That is one OC of yours I really do adore! Bless him!

Really looking forward to the next one...as I always am! This story is just a great joy to read!

this story is really interesting! the plot is creative, and you write the characters well. balthier freakin' rocks, as always. i'd like to read more!

Hiya there. I just got Final Fantasy 12, and even though I haven't defeated it or anything, I have read a lot about it. And your story is the first real fanfic about it that I've ever read. Now that that's outta the way...

I think your story is excellent, and you captured the characters' personalitles wonderfully, especially Balthier and Fran. So I'm putting your story in my story alert thing-y and adding the story to my favorites. :D

Excellent! I'm so pleased to see another update of this story, mainly because Jules and Carter are just hilarious and brilliant! As is the little Nu mou with Ashe!

“Not to be rude, Your Highness, but you can see over the tops of people’s heads better than I. I have seen nothing but belts, waistcoats, and bare stomachs for the past ten minutes.” That made me chuckle!

Now what is going to happen? Will Balthier and the others get safely out of the wood? Basch'll come an' help them won't he? ;) Either way, I do look forward to the next chapter!

Great piece!

Awesome chapter!

Poor Balthier...his beloved Strahl crashing like that. (I loved the plan B ideas though!)

But for me..the highlight was Basch! YAY! (sh crazy fangirl sh.) But him taking poor Carter's helm off! That was great!

I'm still loving how you have Balthier, Fran and Jules so perfectly IC! I look forward to seeing more!

Oh, poor Balthier... I'm sure the Strahl will be fixed... eventually. T-T

Anyway, it seems to me that if they're strong enough to... finish the game, so to speak, a little run through the Salikawood should be a piece of cake, even with only four party members.

Well, unless they have to protect Jules or something...

Please update soon! I am liking this story very much :)

A dogfight! Excellent! Poor Vaan seeing that his ship had been nicked!

As usual, you have Balthier so perfect! My favourite line of his

"Mind you don’t fog up the windows; Fran’s going to have to be able to see.” I can clearly see him dragging Vaan back!

I now await to see this great game of chicken and how Fran, Balthier and Jules are going to get aboard!

Thank for the read...sorry for the late review. :)

That certainly did move things along!

I loved how it was Carter who had the stones thrown at him! It really made me smile. But where was Basch??!

I loved the Vaan ("I'm not finished reading the letter" bit.)

So the chase is on!! I'm fascinated to see where this will go!!

Sorry for not reviewing this earlier, make no excuses!


I do love this story, Balthier and Fran are just brilliant and add Jules into the mix, they make a right team don't they? Yes, Balthier is very valuable! (That line was my fav!)

And I knew that Larsa would know of something! He had to! It's great to know that he's got Basch looking out for them, but though they're probably not expecting Balthier to break out..right? Well...they might do. XD I look forward to seeing Ashe come into this as well! It's all getting exciting.

And B'Gamnan..that was a lovely twist at the end! He's back and that's going to cause more trouble!! Whoo hoo!

Look forward to the next enstallment!

This story's getting good. The return of Ba'Gamnan? Can't wait to see more.

Ooh...the plan has gone wrong I see! Oh dear, but I did enjoy this little gem, and yeah, Fran would go ballistic if Jules tried anything on with her!

I look forward to the next chapter! XD

Very interesting! I look forward to further chapters. Fran and Jules? Hahaha! What an ironic, temporary partnership. I can see him being very raunchy to her and getting a kick in the groin or two. xD